Tuesday, September 20, 2011

It will happen to you!


 So it was going to be the weekend..
but, unlike the usual plan of things,
thursday had said that him we'd have to send..
so far away that he'll fly away on wings..

She thought to herself in the red blue green of life,
maybe the Bandra fair was going to last just another little while..
off she went to see the what's all the hype,
little did she know, she would walk more than just a mile!

With the bisleri by her side,
she walked admist a thousand others..
just looking for someone to give her a ride..
She was walking past all kinds of cars and then there were honking scooters!

She laid her eyes on this huge white truck,
Quietly sitting in the middle of the mess which she had now begun to dread,
she peered in through the tints and she was star struck!
It really was him, legs held against the dashboard, a fsherman's cap securily covering his forehead!

He kept looking into his phone,
absolutely snug, even amidst chaos...
She stood there for endless seconds, just admiring how his skin shone..
and how he was so comfortable in the mayhem he caused!

When she got pushed by another fan,
did reality really sink!
She had just seen Ranbir Kapoor, the man,
such was the power, that she dint even blink!


She was ecstatic, her day had been made..
making her forget how much she had walked!!

Thank you Thursday Poets Rally for the Perfect Poem Award
  I nominate dakshi for the next award.

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18 comments:

  1. mohit guptaSeptember 20, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    welcome back aanchal

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  2. Ocassionally Yours VineetSeptember 20, 2011 at 7:49 PM

    great one.. the ending is awesome for one reading it 1st time..

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  3. The twenties girlSeptember 20, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    @mohit gupta: thanks dad!
    @ocassionally yours: thanks a ton!!

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  4. Manpreet CheemaSeptember 20, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    Amazingly written! aftr listening to the story u jus told me ... this poem is such a treat:)
    Loved it!!!

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  5. The twenties girlSeptember 21, 2011 at 7:20 AM

    thanks minu!!!

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 4:09 AM

    Wonderful story and well told, too. Nice one!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/

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  7. The twenties girlSeptember 22, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    thanks Charles!

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  8. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySeptember 22, 2011 at 7:02 PM

    amazing story.
    Glad to see you in.

    Happy Poetry Picnic.

    :)

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  9. Brian MillerSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:57 PM

    a fine bit of story telling there...very nice...

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    It is really neat when you see someone famous, especially if you think they are cute! I remember the time when I first saw Larry Bird, a famous American basketball player and later coach. Oh, he was huge! He was a giant! I couldn't believe it! He just towered over everybody... And I felt like I was in a different world, and like it wasn't real or something.... it was really awesome... I like your poem...

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  11. The twenties girlSeptember 24, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    @morning: thank u so much! Happy Poetry picnic!!
    @Brian Miller: thank u for stopping by..
    @johnallenrichter: when u see someone famous, that moment becomes super huge!! glad u connect with it! :)

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  12. mohit guptaSeptember 25, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    aanchal hope the wait for the next is not long

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  13. SheilaSeptember 26, 2011 at 2:32 AM

    enjoyed your story, thanks :)

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  14. The twenties girlSeptember 26, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    @dad: yea, i hope so too!
    @sheila: thanks for stopping by..

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 27, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    Happy Rally,

    fantastic story, aptly words crafted in it.

    :)

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  16. The PoetSeptember 27, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    Hello.
    My first time visiting from Thursday Poets Rally.

    I really enjoyed this. Being familiar with the Kapoor family (Raj Kapoor was at his best when he did Mukesh Chand Mathur songs), I can see how She would be starstruck with Ranbir.

    Nice story.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Your Song Of Love

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  17. yulistya deySeptember 28, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    I like your title. It gives a hint that a dream, yes, it will happen! ^^ Well done, happy rally. :)

    http://dhitermination.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/endless-fog/

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  18. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton September 29, 2011 at 1:20 AM

    very focused writing, thanks for sharing,

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