Thursday, March 17, 2011

To have loved and lost..

He is an enigma,
an intellect and decidely indifferent,
She is vivacious, a lesser enigma,
woman & child at once, yet a little distant.

Furtive glances are exchanged,
coffee outings are framed,
pitter patter of raindrops is heard,
Everything is said without a word..

More intimate now, they read morning papers together,
go shopping for groceries in the most romantic weather.
They look perfect, are inseparable
losing each other, the thought is unbearable.

Another day, another story,
there he is, with someone, maybe temporary.
She wonders, one arguement could break us?
Cries & shouts, could he really transgress?

To get him back, she moves heaven and earth,
he cannot see what she is worth..
She resigns, wishes him well,
in solitude, her eyes bleed & swell..

She sees them everyday, share meals & rides,
workplace isn't always paradise.
No one to answer her plea,
She is miles away from the hint of glee..

Repeated efforts and all come to a naught,
but really,to have loved and lost?
Soon they will tie the knot,
while she is torn in colors for the cot..



20 comments:

  1. when she is torn in colors for the cot? OMG.. here is a dedication, the cry of a mother - the lost world and how hurting it would be if you lost someone special in your life to have loved and lost

    Someone is Special

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  2. :(((
    i absolutely hate dis topic!!!
    hav cn three blogs n evryones writin on d same subjectt!!!
    as fr d poem, i thot u brought out d despair beautifully
    yada yada..hope u dont write much of dis kind of stuf often...its realy rather depressin :D

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  3. the progress of the relation and later the death of the same is beautifully expressed! the last stanza gave me goosebumps... one word amazing!

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  4. the use of present tense adds a realness to it..like it!

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  5. @someone is special: Thanks for the OMG.. I'm coming to read yours very soon...

    @ Sadiya:thanku so much for your ... As for the topic, it is very depressing.. you shoud read This one for a lighter read!

    @girl with a read bag: Thanku so much for the generous praise.. It was a difficult topic to write on...

    @pali:Thanku so much...

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  6. Nice one..:)

    - Raghu
    http://arewetrulyhumans.blogspot.com
    http://reflections-shatteredmirror.blogspot.com

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  7. invite you to join poets rally week 40...
    simply visit me for details...all submissions are to be represented by the end of the week.
    Happy Writing.
    Looking forward to seeing you share your talent with us.
    You rock.
    xx

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  8. @PPPL: Thanks a ton for stopping by! surely I would love to participate!

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  9. Aanchal,
    Very much touched by it.
    Very well written :)

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  10. that was strong and straight...congrats for making it to the top ten:)

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  11. one word...beautiful......i can see and feel the pain

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  12. @BlogJunta: thanks a ton for the 7th position! it was a great surprise! :)

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  13. @raksha:thanku so much & Congratulations! it was very well deserved...

    @the critics: thanku so much! it means alot..

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  14. powerful..


    come join poetry potluck today, your are missed if you don’t.
    Happy Monday,
    Bless your talent.
    xxx

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  15. Beautiful one. It flowed really well. Congrats on being selected as one of the best 10 in the contest.

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  16. Nice.....took me a long time to find your blog, you had not left a link :)

    Liked everything but the last para.....couldn't she be a little more stronger? Just a thought ;)

    A biig CONGO for the win!

    @Sadiya Agree the topic is depressing.....and reading all the posts under this topic(including my entry) made me think - itna sadness kyun hai bhai :P

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  17. @the fool: thank u so much....
    @coolkamikazecat: thanks for the effort of finding the blog... sometimes in life, stronger isn't the option.. maybe she had had too much of everything by then.... a thought...

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